The Screenplay Idea:

    Make a good horror script with a female protagonist that doesn't end up a whimpering crying wreck at the end of the movie. Sounds simple right?

    "Off The Post..." started off a completely different script. And after many, many, many, many revisions, it is now complete. An older revision of the script placed in the Top 1000 Scripts of Bravo's Project Greenlight 3.

    "Off The Post..."'s Logline:

    What if your parents unleashed a supernatural evil and you were accused of it's crimes?

    "Off The Post..."'s Synopsis:

    “Off The Post...” is horror thriller set in upstate New York where a female army weapon specialist home from Iraq on bereavement leave finds her hometown a war zone, ravaged by a supernatural evil. Believed responsible for the murders it has committed, she struggles to save herself, her hometown and to prove her innocence


    "Off The Post..." Concept Art

    Once the script was done, Paul decided to create some Concept Art to hightlight specific scenes from the script. The 4x6 Card was a hit at Screenwriting Expo 2 and will probably be turned into a one sheet. The other three Concept Pages highlighted our Protagonist and our Antagonist.

    4x6 Card
    Concept Art Page 1
    Concept Art Page 2
    Concept Art Page 3

    Lastly, the script was finished and sent to WGA and The Library of Congress.

    "Off The Post..." The Finished Script

    Click here to view a PDF File of it.

    If any Production Companies or Agents find "Off The Post..." to their liking feel free to get in touch with us via my email address rkbentleyatphantomridersdotcom.



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